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VeX
13th March 2006, 02:52 PM
I'll let you guys figure out what it's about...

Amidst foul footwear,
Hiding, ready to be a -
Disturbing surprise.


More to come...

Domini
13th March 2006, 03:27 PM
The Darkling that's going to devour your face?

I don't know what else would be in foul footwear.

Solarious
14th March 2006, 12:17 AM
The Darkling that's going to devour your face?

I don't know what else would be in foul footwear.
We think with the same mind Domini. We all must read Levi's Answers.

Domini
14th March 2006, 03:22 PM
True... but that's off topic...


When are you going to have the next things up?

VeX
15th March 2006, 03:16 PM
When I bother to get better topics I guess.

I got one about a raze I just made up for the sake of making more.

Anger spread quickly,
like a rising mushroom cloud,
And destroyed likewise.

Man that's a good senryu. I might expand on that one...

In fact, I'm gonna post it on dA.